update 01/01/2012:
Well, here's chapter 2. Thanks for our contributor, Ashesh Patel. Enjoy it!
update 01/02/2012:
Well, here's chapter 3. Thanks for our contributor, Hero. Enjoy it!
Chapter 01: Mediafire
Chapter 02: Mediafire
Chapter 03: Mediafire
Chapter 04: Mediafire
~himariida
note: ch 04 in a few days.
what is new in this version ?
ReplyDeletethanks for the release!
ReplyDelete@Anonymous: in the first version there were mistakes that have been corrected now.
Thanks for taking the time to redo these!
ReplyDeleteThe script has been rewritten, and it's more comprehensible than the first, but it's still riddled with errors and poor english. Please take my criticism to heart, I cannot stress how important good english is when translating something from another language. Things are already lost in translation as it is, so everything else needs to be as high quality as possible.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your efforts to improve though. You're not going unnoticed.
I second what Anonymous above (2:19am) said. While the re-released version is semi-tolerable for reading now, it is still filled "with errors and poor english."
ReplyDeleteI appreciate you taking the time to work on this series, but before, I wasn't even reading it because of how unbearable the engrish was.
I recall people volunteering to edit the script for you before. I would highly suggest calling out again for those volunteers.
I am Anonymous #1 .
ReplyDeleteEnglish isn't my native language. And i don't even recognize where error .
manga is quite funny. English isn't my native language either, so i don't care so much about mistakes. I appreciate your work so keep on
ReplyDeleteis chapter 2 and 3 from the same scan group? Because it got tremendously better =)! Keep up the fantastic work!~
ReplyDelete@above Anonymous
ReplyDeleteWell, there was a proofreader.
Fire your proofreader. He fails. Get a new one, one that is fluent (and native) at rapid, idiomatic English and actually paid attention in school. Please.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, happy new year to you!
@Anonymous
ReplyDeleteFor what chapter? Maybe that's just my mistake
Well, happy new year too.
thanks for the releases much appreciated
ReplyDeleteproofreader??? please get one from somewhere (or replace the one you have). it is so hard to understand what is going on because all the tenses are messed up. some of the lines barely make any sense. i appreciate that you scanlated these chapters but i just cant understand what is being said. i'm guessing english is not your first language...so i think it'd be awesome if you went to bakaupdates and asked for someone to look over your work.
ReplyDeleteup above is me^. seems like chapters 1-3 are v2'd (the english is much better) thanks for v2'ing these chapters, really appreciate it.
ReplyDeletechapter fouuuuuuuuuur prease ;_; i like this manga very fucking much!
ReplyDeleteHi, I also like this manga but I do see a lot of errors, if you are interested in releasing a version3, I can help out. Hero knows me (HI HERO!) and while I still have free time I am willing to help out. I'll check back to see if you guys will take my offer, or you can contact hero to contact me.
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